First Timer

Hey guys! So this is my first time bogging and it would be helpful if you tell me my mistakes and what I should do and stuff. If you guys play Animal Jam or Club Penguin my CP user is Giuy7 and my AJ user is Giuy911. Please don't judge my usernames. I was small when I made it, but I have come to love it. I might make more posts soon during weekends and stuff because I have school right now. Thanks for reading and please post any suggestions.